By Author: Phyllis Whitfield
Appearing in issue #21, May 27, 2013
For sale date: May 16, 2013
Tag line: It was a dark and stormy night when one of Pete Patton’s many
enemies came to call.
Police characters: County Sheriff Eddie Smith
The gist: The power is out in River Falls for a half hour. At 8:05 Sheriff Smith gets a call that Pete
Patton, who lives in the neighboring town of Glen Oaks, has been shot. Nobody likes Pete. He’s bad tempered and has made a fortune
selling organic potatoes to fast-food restaurants. Sheriff Smith meets Alex Till at Patton’s
door, who tells him the body is upstairs.
Alex, the plumber, had an 8:00 AM appointment with Pete. He said no one answered the doorbell but
lights were on and since Pete was expecting him, he just went on inside and
found Pete dead. Alex said he got along
with Pete but that he didn’t always pay on time. The coroner announced Pete was
killed an hour ago.
Pete’s
ex-wife, Helen, wasn’t happy in the divorce. She lives in Glen Oaks. She wasn’t
sorry that he was dead. When asked where
she was at 8:00 she said she was working on her computer.
Pete’s nephew Jesse fought with him all the time. Jesse lives in River Falls. He said his uncle used Jesse’s savings to
start the business and even though the money was paid back, Peter wouldn’t give
cut the nephew in on a share of the profits.
He said he had been home been watching TV all evening with his
girlfriend and she would vouch for him.
Pete’s
sister Connie was treated poorly by Pete. She lives in Glen Oaks. She said they were family and she just put up
with his mean ways. She claims she was
reading a good book at the time her brother was killed.
Crime scene:
Pete’s home.
Clues: The power was out at the time of the death.
Suspects: Ex-wife Helen, Sister Connie, nephew Jesse.
Red herrings: None. We had four 'suspects' but not one of them had a good enough motive to even be considered as a red herring.
Solution: Jesse was the only one who lived in River
Falls. He claimed he was watching TV all
night but there was no power for a short time.
He didn’t know the power was out in River Falls because he was in Glen
Oaks fighting with his uncle, a fight then ended up with him shooting Pete.
My two cents: Well, there are a couple of things
here. Just because the power was out in
one city doesn’t mean it was not out in the neighboring city. The sheriff never asked if the power was out
in Glen Oaks. And it was only off for 30
minutes. The wife said she was on the
computer. Computers work without
power. The sister said she was reading. You can read without a lamp. Jesse said he was watching TV all night, and
he could have been. Just because he
didn’t say I was watching TV all night expect for 30 minutes when the power
went out doesn’t make him a killer.
How many
plumbers do you know that just walk into your house when no one answers the
bell?
There
were four people to keep track of and two cities. It was a bit confusing and crowded in the
‘ole suspect room’. Nobody had a really
good motive to kill Pete. He had paid
back the money. His divorce wasn’t pleasant but whose is? (And we didn’t all kill our exes. um...we didn't, right?) Pete treated his sister badly, but she didn’t have to
take it. There’s no compelling reason to
kill here. That along with the vague inference that the power must have been on in the neighboring
city makes for a ho-hum mystery
