Title:
Accidents Happen
By
Author: Rosemary Hayes
Tag line: It looked like Tony Anderson had
loved his wine collection to death!
Police characters: Detective Tanya Tate, Officer Pete Neller
The gist: Tony lived alone in a tidy house on
Elm Street. When he didn’t show up to
drive his elderly neighbor to the doctor and didn’t answer his door or phone, she
called the police. Tony was found at the bottom of his cellar stairs with a
broken neck. Time of death was estimated to be between 8:30 and 9:00 yesterday.
Another neighbor told police that he had
heard arguing the day before around nine in the morning. Det. Tate noticed the trap door to the
cellar was located near the sofa and there was a rolled up rug pushed to the
side. Officer Neller told the detective
that during the first sweep of the house when they were looking for Tony, they
hadn’t found him and had missed the trap door to the cellar because the rug was
covering it. Upon finding the cellar opening and going down, the officer noted
that the third step was wobbly. The cellar
was well lit and had an impressive wine collection.
Det. Tate looked through Tony’s cell phone and
saw that he had intended to go to a wine auction with Jim Mills yesterday
morning. When Jim was questioned he said
that Tony did not go to the wine auction claiming he wasn’t feeling well. He said he arrived at Tony’s house a little
before nine. When asked about the
arguments, he said they were not arguing, but they often traded mock insults
and Jim liked to tease Tony about his procrastinating ways. Tony liked to tease Jim about his compulsive
tendencies. Det. Tate speculated out
loud that perhaps Jim wanted to stop Tony from buying some wine. He claimed that Tony was alive when he
left. As he was speaking to the
detective he straightened out a picture frame that was a little off
kilter. Jim knew about the wobbly step
as he had been in the wine cellar many times.
He said Tony would go down into the cellar and close the trap door so he
could have peace and quiet down there and speculated that because Tony wasn’t
feeling well, he must have hit that wobbly stair wrong and fell.
Detective
Tate knew that it was not an accident and she knew Jim killed Tony.
Crime scene: Tony’s wine cellar.
Clues: Jim was compulsive. The rug was covering the trap door.
Suspects: Jim.
Red herrings: None.
Solution: Jim didn’t want Tony to go to the
auction. He pushed him down the stairs,
closed the trap door, and because he was a neat freak he put the rug back in
place.
My two cents: Well…this one was quite easy to
solve. We didn’t even have any other
suspects. Tony either fell or he was
pushed. The rug over the trap door was
pretty obvious. I guess Det. Tate’s
speculation about the ‘why’ of the murder will have to do as a motive, although
it was never confirmed.
This story
was just okay. Nothing to write home about. It was a bit of a tedious read, and it got
bogged down in places with dull, cumbersome writing.
4 comments:
While the multiple suspects angle gets boring, the was-it-an-accident-or-was-it-murder setup isn't too exciting, either.
I wonder if anyone has ever done a story in WW where someone who *wasn't* a suspect (like, say the neighbor) ended up being the culprit? Might be a novelty...
Nicely written story, I thought. Yes, the clue about the rug being put back in place was a giveaway but at least it was in the main text this week, not shoehorned into the solution where we've got no chance of working it out. I would have liked one more suspect to blur the edges a bit, make us work for our satisfaction fix, but otherwise I was fine with this one.
Hey,Jody, what is this new I am not a robot thing? Very confusing. Where I thought I was to type in the Captcha numbers, it suddenly said Publish Comment, or something like that and took me out of the comments. The previous set up was very simple. Didn't it work?
@ Mary Jo. BlogSpot, as with all techy programs, keeps on 'improving' their service. Hackers and the problems they cause force programmers to keep making changes. We, the blog owners, have no say and really never know when a change is coming. I didn't chose the robot thingy, it just appeared one day. I guess we'll get used to it. It seems they have added a second step, but it works okay. At least is does for me.
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