How did Det. Price know?
Crime scene: A warehouse.
Clues: The victim’s shirt.
Suspects: None in the traditional sense. We know Archie shot this man.
Red herrings: None.
Solution: Because Det. Price had to lift the material of the shirt up to match it to the bullet hole in the man’s body, she knew the victim had had his hands up when he was shot. Archie and the day guard were partners. The day guard would store the goods behind the Dumpster and Archie would put them in his trunk when he came on his shift.
My two cents: A private investigator carries a weapon. Wonder what happened to it. Must have been an interesting character. He wore a Hawaiian shirt to work. Way to fit in and not be noticed.
Dumpster is a trade -marked named, like Kleenex, and is capped.
I can’t find anything majorly wrong with this story. It was well written and it had a good clue, so it gets four stars.