By Author Kendra Yoder
Appearing in issue #14, April 8, 2013
For sale date: March 29, 2013
Tag line: A scene-of-the-crime-investigation
revealed an open-and-shut case!
Police characters: Officer Phil Perkins and his partner
Officer Wendy Kerr
The gist: Ricky, a musician, is shot to death in his home garage where
the band rehearses. The coroner believed
the victim was sitting on a folding chair, was shot by a known person, and
slumped to the floor dead. The makeshift
practice area in the garage looked like this: catty-corner from the chair was a
music stand with a song book, on the floor beside that was an open guitar case
holding an electric guitar, and in the opposite corner stood a set of drums.
Crime scene: In the garage with the garage door open.
Clues: Ricky knew his assailant. When questioned Ricky’s wife stated she was
in the kitchen making lunch when halfway through a song she heard a bang. Officer Perkins told his partner that the wife
was lying.
Suspects: Ricky fired Bo, the lead singer, last
weekend. Bo was a bad influence, always staying out late and drinking. Bo was
furious and called Ricky a dead man before he stalked off stage. Ricky’s agent had just been accused of
skimming money and they argued yesterday.
Red herrings: The fight with the lead singer and the fight with the
agent. Both were orchestrated to throw
you off the wife’s track.
Solution: The wife said she could hear Ricky
practicing his guitar when he was shot, yet his guitar was still in the case. The wife was tired of her husband’s drinking
and carousing so she decided to end her marriage the quick way and try to frame
one of the men.
My two cents: It is possible for someone to enter through the garage door
opening, wave to Ricky to stop playing, Ricky puts down the guitar (most
musicians are careful with their expensive equipment and lay it in the case
when not in use) , and when he looks back up he immediately gets shot. I think the wife’s statement should have been
written better. “Halfway through a song
and she heard a bang” is not clear enough for the officer to think she was
lying. Also Bo stating that Ricky was a ‘dead
man’ was a bit of a forced clue by the author.
I don’t know that much about the music world, but do ‘garage bands’ even
have agents?
2 comments:
Jody:
Are you going to critique the recent WW story about the jacket that slips off a chair and thus leads to the killer? I didn't think that was a very believable clue.
Best,
Sharon C.
I don't get my WW until Fridays in this area. (sometimes Saturday) I will indeed be slicing and dicing that story. Thanks for stopping by.
Jody
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