tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5015329098122035196.post3620448025281171702..comments2023-09-30T10:31:07.390-04:00Comments on Short Fiction. Write it. Sell it. : Jody E. Lebelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08777207515123248962noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5015329098122035196.post-87357368614392420172013-08-10T11:31:51.389-04:002013-08-10T11:31:51.389-04:00That's a good point. Those table items should...That's a good point. Those table items should have been tucked in the story here and there instead of one lump. It was obvious the author was trying to give us a clue there, but she mislead us by changing something in the solution. That's the bigger sin to me. Jody E. Lebelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08777207515123248962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5015329098122035196.post-31077258973927131142013-08-10T10:39:30.687-04:002013-08-10T10:39:30.687-04:00The amount of stuff on the bedside dresser emphasi...The amount of stuff on the bedside dresser emphasised its importance, I felt. Might've been better placing a couple of them elsewhere. Must admit the lack of a glass didn't seem like a clue to me either - I'd have quite happily guzzled from the jug (slob). I'm with you on the issue of a doctor signing a close family member's death cert. There are protocols in place about even treating a family member (it's advised against on both sides of the pond), so I'm sure that issuing a death cert must be even more closely controlled. So that was like a big red marker pointing to the killer to me.Chrisnoreply@blogger.com